This is one of those pages where, for me anyway, it feels like everything is firing on all cylinders. I’m super happy with how this has all turned out. Will’s design work on Ikhadi’s “intimidaiton form” is sick. Even the amazing touch of having Ikhadi’s speech balloon fading out like the rest of her is a brilliant little detail that Jacob brought to the page completely unprompted by Will and me. I even like what I’ve done here, although for me it’s a small part of the scene as a whole, which isn’t the worst thing I’ve ever written.
None of this matters, of course, if you’re not feeling it too. There’s SO MUCH DANGER in being satisfied with what we’ve done. But I, at least, have learned something from these most recent scenes, and I hope it’s showing.