I’m very happy with this page. I like for characters and readers to discover things at the same time; I think it heightens suspense and it cuts down on a need for exposition. (I think this was the biggest problem with the film Green Lantern. Why did we have to learn about the Green Lantern Corps twice…once in voice over and again when Hal Jordan did? That is a HUGE part of why the movie failed. TRUST YOUR AUDIENCE.) Where was I? Oh yeah, Will nails Maliya’s expression in Panel Two. I give him some complicated subtleties to draw in terms of facial expression from time to time, and he manages to do a lot with very simple renderings.