Hunter might not have intended that pun…but I certainly did. I actually wrote this page twice. The original dialogue for this page was fine, but it didn’t pick up Hunter’s internal monologue about Jobo and the Tourney. Fortunately, I often have to go back a reread stuff when I’m working, and I realized that what I’d originally done worked for the page-to-page readers, but not so well for the people who read the comic in chunks. Since we’d eventually like to do a collected edition…
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