Of all the work we’ve done recently, this is my least favorite. In hindsight, this doesn’t feel like a page unto itself, it feels fragmentary. The problem is I need to give Will room to breathe on these pages, because there’s so much to show. (And Will is bringing it on this page. This is on me.) The Reshaped Men in the background are there to lend the dialogue impact…I don’t know. I’d rethink this if I could. The constraints of a deadline, along with having a head full of bugs recently, sometimes put me up against a wall. It gets better from here, I promise.